This week we worked on the long proposal. It was a group efforts so we decided to split up the piece into three different parts. Sarah got the abstract of the project, the statement of purpose, and the statement of qualification. I got the cover page and the literature review. Rachel took the research method description and the work cited page. When every one is done with their part, they all e-mailed me so I can put them all together since I'm the submitter for the long proposal. On Friday, we did the peer review and there was some feedback on the footnote. I asked Karen for clarification so that worked out well. There were also a few feedbacks on grammar and wording. Sarah, Rachel and I are planning to meet at my house on Saturday to try to "perfectize" the long proposal. I think it would be fun so I'm really looking forward to that.